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Today we chose to run away
From fate, from pain, from misery


"I can't believe we're doing this", you said while looking out the side window.

"It's just something that had to be done", I replied and leaned back a bit more.

The road we were on was straight until the horizon though we couldn't see it yet. The sun was just coming up and the morning fog covered the still sleeping world in grey. The sky was overcast, but the first sun rays were already peaking through.

"They're gonna worry", you sighed.

The engine made this monotonous sound, a steady roaring in the silence. We had chosen the black pick-up truck they had offered at the car rental service. A big car in a big world. Perfect.

"Sure they'll worry, but you shouldn't. We just had to get out for a while. They'll understand", I said and looked at you for a few seconds before concentrating on driving again.

Your eyes told the truth. They always did. You said, you were worried, but at the same time you knew we had each other. We had our friendship, our interests, our stories. A lot we could always share.
There was nothing to worry about as long as we were together.
I told you that and in the corner of my eye I saw you smiling. It wasn't something you did very often, though I always said that it looked a whole lot better on you. Actually we both didn't smile very often, but there was no need for it in the first place.
Bad things had happened in both of our lives, painful things that had created bad memories and nightmares. That's why we had run away: To get away from all that, to take a break from all the pressure, from all the fear and to just forget everything for a while.

"I guess, you're right. You think they saw it coming?", you asked.

"Some might have noticed", I answered and shrugged. You remained silent.

"Where are we?", you then asked after a few seconds.

The funny thing was that most people couldn't follow our topic changes or just shook their heads when we stopped talking about something serious (just like now), but we didn't mind at all.

"Does that really matter?", I asked back.

"I guess not", you answered with a slight smile on your lips.

"This, my friend", I grinned. "is what we have dreamt of. The road to nowhere, our never-ending story, our great escape!"
©2009 *Nhami
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Author's Comments

I hope you know who you are...

This is nothing special, just something I had to do for English class. We're doing creative writing and damn, I'm loving it. Too bad I go back into 11th grade.

Anyway, we had to choose from several pictures and I picked out the picture of a long, straight road, leading to nowhere. The picture was black & white so it could have been either snow or sand to the left and right of the street.
Then we had to write something. It could have either been an interior monologue or a poem or a short story or a speech or a newspaper article.
I was thinking of writing a poem, but nothing was coming to my mind...but then I had to think of "The Great Escape" by Boys Like Girls and remembered that I had always been wanting to write a story about it. The lyrics don't fit the story, but The Great Escape surely does.

I chose this preview picture to represent the scene, 'cause it fits it better. This is a street you could find in Canada or America.
I admit, I was thinking of Canada while writing the short story, but...eventually it's your choice.
And just if you're interested: I thought of a black Dodge pick-up truck. Yeah, I love Dodge!

I know, I wrote "fog", "overcast", "morning" and all that, but hey, that's just the beginning of the story. Imagine it to go on until noon until we hit this town..."and there was nothing there at all". Yes, I also thought of "Everytime" by Simple Plan. I think, the picture looks like it's 11 AM or 16/17 PM. Either morning or afternoon.

So, this is my dream...to drive on an endless road with a huge black (could also be white) Dodge, with my best friend(s) there as well. That's what I call freedom. I'd let the world wonder where we are.

If you want you can pretend that the "I" is you and the "you" is your best friend. Maybe then the story appeals to you more. Uh, I'm sure that's what you do anyway. xD

Erm, yeah...I guess, that's it for now.

Enjoy!!

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Ooooooh mimieeeh ó__ò
Ich weiß nich warum, aber ich find's total schnüff T__T
Aber schön. =3

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I'M SOMEONE ELSE
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I can count to four and repeat. I'm a drummer! :dance:
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jaaaah, es ist wirklich ein wenig....schnüff. =/ halt mein traum. -___-

und merci, freut mich, dass es dir gefällt. :D

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Which came first:
The music or the misery?
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"The road we were on was straight. Until the horizon though we couldn't see it yet. "

I'm pretty sure you meant to combine these two sentences, so I thought I'd point it out for you. :)

I really like this piece. It's very open, with a sense of freedom, but I also get a sense of fear at what might be ahead, and what might follow in their wake... :+fav:

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I've cut my heart out, so you can catch a glimpse of my RawEm0tion

"I'm sorry I'm not cheerier; I tried to cut myself today and it didn't really work out..."
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Aww, thanks a lot. :)

And also thanks for pointing the sentence out. It all was just a rough draft so I didn't really pay much attention to the grammar and all that.
But I'll change it. ^^ :hug:

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Which came first:
The music or the misery?
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Very good job. :)

I have Creative Writing too, it's awesome so far. :)

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Pete: Eggmanland Taxi Service?
Sonic: Because the prince of every failing empire knows that everybody wants, everybody wants, to drive on through the night, if it's the drive back home!
Pete: ...clever.
:iconnhami:
yeah, I really enjoy it. it's fun. :D

and glad you like it. :hug: thanks!

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Which came first:
The music or the misery?
:iconbeyond-the-pages:
You're welcome.:)

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I've cut my heart out, so you can catch a glimpse of my RawEm0tion

"I'm sorry I'm not cheerier; I tried to cut myself today and it didn't really work out..."

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